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Almost Closing Time

March 29th 2010 12:06
NanoEdmo, and the month of March, is almost over. With any luck, and minimal interference, you should be finishing off your second draft, almost ready to write 'the end' once again. During these final days, you're going to be concerned with how your novel will end, reaching an ending that will give both you and your readers satisfaction.

If you're writing a stand alone book, read through your rewritten chapters and make sure there aren't any plot threads that have been dropped. If there are, pick them up again and finish them off. Write a satisfying end to the story you've been writing, but don't end your book on a static note. Just because the evil overlord has been defeated or the two characters have been married doesn't mean that your world and your characters won't face future challenges. It's not 'happily ever after'. Your characters are living, breathing people and they will continue to be so after the book is done.

If you're working on a book that's part of a series (and not the last book) then remember to tie up the book's individual plot and leave the main plot at a point where you-and the readers-are willing to wait to find out what happens next. If your characters are on an epic journey, then end with them in a fairly safe place, perhaps sleeping their last night in safety before they continue on their way. Or end them having just overcome a major challenge and preparing for the one ahead. There are many ways to end it, but you want two things-story satisfaction, and a curiosity about what happens next.

And if, like me, you're still deeply entrenched in the middle of your second draft, don't worry too much about it. Life probably got in the way with various distractions-sick friends or family (or sick you), extra things to be done at work, big projects at school-and you shouldn't beat yourself up for attending to those things before your novel. For most of you, this isn't your job; you're only accountable to yourself, and beating yourself up does more harm than good.

For those of you who have finished editing your novel or are very close to the end-congratulations. You've come a long way from the messy first draft to the mostly mess-free second draft. Once your job is done, give yourself a reward, a fancy dinner, a sweet dessert, a walk through the park, a hot bath: whatever makes you smile.

For those of you who are in the middle with me-just change the date. I plan on having my second draft, and some minor edits to the first couple of chapters of that second draft, done by the end of April. Come with me on my journey to reach the end of our books. This 'workshop' is over and the posts about editing will be less frequent, but I will be regularly updating and if I find any more cool links, I'll send them your way.

No matter where you are in your book or on the planet, no matter who you are, I'd just like to say thank you for reading this blog. I hope that you'll stay with me throughout my journey as a writer and throughout your own.
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Editing Exercise Two: Dialogue Tags

March 18th 2010 12:06
Today's exercise is about dialogue tags.

You want dialogue to stand on its own. Dialogue tags shouldn't have to explain how your character said it. A reader should be able to tell who's speaking fairly easily without any dialogue tags at all, but you also don't want to go too long in a scene without dialogue tags.

Today, go back over the chapters you've already edited and look for any dialogue tags that use verbs other than 'said'. 'Asked', 'answered', and 'replied' are all right once in a while. Even 'yelled' or 'shouted' is all right once in a while. Anything that's downright impossible 'he gimaced', 'she chuckled', should be replaced by 'said'. And anything silly like 'he interrupted' should also be replaced by 'said'.

Change at least three dialogue tags in which you find verbs other than said.

While you're at it, look for any words ending with '-ly' that come after dialogue. Chances are, they don't need to be there. Readers should be able to tell when your character is saying something sarcastic, so 'sarcastically' shouldn't appear. And things along that line. Cut out 95% of all the '-ly' words you find in dialogue tags, and if the dialogue doesn't make sense anymore, you'll have some heavy rewriting to do-but it's all worth it if it gets you published, right?

And if the work seems like it'll go on forever, like it's impossible to do, remember that some people like to believe six impossible things before breakfast.
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Carpal Tunnel

March 27th 2008 05:41
Well I haven't been here in ages and OF COURSE when I want to get back into writing a lot more, I get something that MIGHT be carpal tunnel.

Now doesn't my life just suck?
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So it's not quite every day yet...

February 21st 2008 15:29
However I have been writing! I've been writing quite a lot lately, actually, and the other day I sent out two of my poems to small no-pay markets. I need to get my name out there somehow, even if it's just 'I was published by Unheard of Magazine 1', ya know?

I've been very hard-working, studying, looking at things, reading, writing, all sorts of things lately. My school attendance is still lacking and that is simply because I don't care. I don't care about my education. Really


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Stress leave

January 31st 2008 13:58
I'm on hiatus for reasons not writing-related. Mostly my mother.

More details in this post, on the other blog (language warning


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Writing Is Difficult Without Computer

January 20th 2008 00:35
I've got very, very limited computer access right now (as in I only have it at my bf's), so my writing is flopping and so is my blogging.

But I AM alive. Yay.
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Been Sick But I'm Back Into It

January 14th 2008 04:16
I've been getting hugely back into my writing as I recover from my stress sickness. I'm getting seriously into it because I want to make a career out of this.

This is my life, this is my dream, this is my career. It is everything to me and it is my only passion-honestly, it's the only thing other than my spirituality that I care about


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Not much to say

January 8th 2008 20:10
I wrote a couple poems, but they sucked pretty badly. So guess what? I've got nothing else to say, I'm just updating to update.
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So here's my plan. I'm going to spend the next few days doing market research. I'm going to write out a list of likely markets and listing those here. That way I'll be motivated to write and submit, and you guys will see some possible markets.

I'm going to restart this blog fully ASAP, it's just I need some time to get myself organized and to get myself with ideas. Eventually everything will be back in good shape around here, but it will take some time [ Click here to read more ]
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And so...

December 10th 2007 05:10
Yep. My titles are random.

I'm happy to say that the blogger over at


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E...dit...ing?

November 29th 2007 04:25
So here's my wonderful update. I have done absolutely nothing. I've started on a new poetry book, as well as writing my nanowrimo and other such wonderful things. I've started what will be a very long series of books for my nanowrimo now, and I'm going to finish editing, synopsizing, and querying with Moonshadow's Guardian.

I have to do one more generic edit of that book, plus formatting. (I WISH I knew somebody who would format the thing for me, but I don't ) I'm also writing a lot lately, because of the time of month; it tends to be my most active. THe time of year, I mean


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It's been a pretty long time, huh?

November 19th 2007 04:00
Well I'm about ready to get fully into the swing of blogging. I need to find my binder with all my brainstorms in it. I promise you one post every day until Christmas break starts, at which time I should be able to start posting twice a day.

So, let me fill you in on all that has happened in my writing world. I have been writing a little here and there. I've also been doing nanowrimo like a mad woman, although I wouldn't call much of it decent fiction. I've returned to my first ever series and I'm really working on it. Starting tomorrow I'm going to get back into editing Moonshadow-and I think this will be the last edit


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Editing Update 05/09/07

September 5th 2007 22:02
Apparently my computer desk was mortally wounded; it collapsed completely. Which means odd posts after school when I can swing it.

I've started high school, and thanks to wonderfully odd sleeping hours, I fell asleep shortly after I got home yesturday... sadly, no editing to report. I have no idea how I'm going to get any work done on Jihad, but I'll do my best. I'll write chapter two no matter if it kills me


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Editing Update 2/09/07

September 3rd 2007 06:28
I've been doing the mind-numbing work that is formatting, although I've really enjoyed some of the reading involved. I've also worked on the first chapter of Jihad and it's finished. It's really short as my first chapters are wont to be, but I don't think this one needs much more detail.

After all, there's only so much a character is allowed to know upon waking up with wings in some strange place they suspect is a cult temple, right


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Editing Update 1/09/07

September 2nd 2007 03:52
Editing is a word that has made itself foreign to me in the last couple of days. My muse has returned and I've been dealing with some serious friend issues but now it's over and I should be back to work soon enough...
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Editing Update 30/08/07

August 30th 2007 04:41
I did read through the first 10 chapters and revise them a bit. I suck at beginnings.

At least I admit it


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Editing Update 29/08/07

August 30th 2007 00:40
Happy birthday to me, happy birthday to me, happy birthday...

It's the hottest day of the year and I haven't left the house at all. My internet has returned from its way-too-long vacation. My editing hasn't really returned yet. I'm not able to get into it like I was before; the heat has completely fried my brain and I'm finding myself completely unable to think straight


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Editing update 27/08/07

August 27th 2007 22:58
My birthday is tomorrow!!! I was working today, all went well, but as for the editing...

I did a fair bit of brainstorming. You know, got all the basic ideas out. For Jihad, I have a mix of brainstorming and outlining, which is there to tell me what I need to write. I also did a lot of brainstorming for blogs. The hope is-in order to make best use of my time-that I will be able to write a post every day, no matter if it gets posted THAT day. This way, I'll have some backups, anyway


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Editing Update 26/08/07

August 25th 2007 18:40
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Sorry People

August 17th 2007 11:56
I basically ran for 15 hours on 5 hours of sleep before falling unconscious. It's a long, vaguely unpleasant story. I didn't get time to blog, and when I woke up today I was playing Final Fantasy 12 for over an hour. So I still have no real time to blog, 'cause I'm leaving in just over 20 minutes.

Tonight I have a baseball game. Then I have to go somewhere with a computer and internet, which is one of two places at the moment. So, I'll probably be blogging at almost midnight tonight. Sadly


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