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Pep Talk and Competition

March 15th 2010 12:19
Today starts off a brand new week, and it's time to look at the month ahead. You might still be struggling with writing a new opening for your book, or you might be almost to the end of your second draft already. If you're in the latter position, I want to give you a big pat on the back. If you're in the former, don't worry, because that's pretty much where I am too.

Before you start your editing today, make a comprehensive list of all the things you wanted to do when editing your first draft. Check off all the things that you've done so far-things like writing a new first chapter, editing your first few scenes, whatever you managed to do that you wanted to do-and then circle all the things you want to do in the next week.

Once you've figured out what you want to do in the next week, assign each item to one of the days this week. For example, today I'm going to be writing up a couple new versions of chapters three and four for my book and finishing the Phoenix's character questionnaire, and tomorrow I'm going to be writing up questionnaires for Loki, the Demon, and Keeran. When you make this plan, don't think too hard about when during those days you're going to do it-just know that on those days, those things need to get done. You'll find little pockets of time if you look hard enough.

While you're thinking about things to do this week-consider taking part in a little competition:

As you know, I've been working on my novel, Phoenix Falling. I've just written a new version of chapter two, and in this chapter, an Elvish woman falls down a flight of stairs. She curses when she falls, of course, but on writing this scene, I realized that my elves don't have any swear words!

So here's what I want you to do: leave a comment with a swear word here. I want it to look like a swear word, short and full of hard consonants, but I don't want it to look too much like any English swear words. You can either come up with something entirely random, or base it off a swear word in another language. Leave a comment here with your name, email address, and your swear word, and whoever comes up with the most interesting swear word for my novel will get an in depth critique of the first five chapters of their manuscript. If you're not ready to let anyone look at your first five chapters yet, then I'll critique up to three short stories OR the first five chapters of a different manuscript.

Entries for the competition are due by 12:01 AM EST on the twentieth. That's a whole week. May the best swearer win!
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Today is the first day of March. It is also the first day of Nanoedmo, a month during which many writers work on editing and some reach for the goal of 50 hours of editing. In honour of these events, and considering the fact that I am also editing my novel this month, I decided at the beginning of this year that I would be doing an editing workshop in March.

Most writers experience some difficulties while writing their books, but for most of us, when we get past that point, we discover that writing is the easy part: rewriting is the hard part.

Those of you who have been reading for a while will have at least seen my Organization and Characterization workshops. Links to both workshops will be at the end of this post. These were designed to help you get ready to edit your novel. Hopefully by now you're ready to start editing.

First you need to have completely reread your novel. You need to have looked on it with fresh eyes, been able to dissect what worked and what didn't. Then you need to decide what you want to edit, if you want to make-or need to make-big structural changes, what you want your final product to look like. You need to get to know your story, your world, your characters, inside and out.

For this workshop you can work by yourself or with a critique partner. I highly recommend that you work with a partner-having someone to give you feedback on your novel, as well as having someone to kick your butt into gear when you aren't doing what you should be doing is incredibly useful.

For the most part, editing is much like writing that first novel. Nobody can tell you how to do it. You come up with your own method. So this month long workshop will not just be a series of exercises. There will be one short editing exercise a week, one post filled with useful links for editing a week, one prompt to get you working on something other than your draft, one pep talk each week, and one update on my work. You can see the post schedule here (clicky).

May this month be a productive one for all of us.

Organization Workshop

~Organization Workshop-Intro
~Day One-Reread
~Day Two: Questions About Tone
~Day Three: Questions About Style
~Day Four: Outlining Your Draft
~Day Five: Throwaways and Add Ons
~Day Six: Outline Your Next Draft

Characterization Workshop

~Characterization Workshop Intro
~Day One: Expanded Character Profiles
~Day Two: Dear Diary
~Day Three: Character Interviews
~Day Four: Final Prompts
~Characterization Workshop: The End

I hope you enjoy these workshops. If you have any comments or would like to do a pep talk for one of my workshops-including this one-please email me at diannalgunn@gmail.com
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Making A Workshop List

February 3rd 2010 12:06
As some of you already know, this year I want to do a workshop that lasts at least one week on my blog. These are meant to be intense, short workshops. In January I did a workshop on Organizing Your Novel, and this month I'll be doing a workshop on characterization. These workshops are designed to help writers with a first draft figure out what they want their story to look like in the next draft, and to help them figure their characters out as well.

I've come up with a theoretical list of workshops for the next year. I'm hoping for some input on what you think would be most useful. Take a look at my list and let me know what you think. Suggestions are welcome.

January-Organizing your novel
February-Characterization
March-Editing
April-Developing a Religion
May-Dear Diary Workshop
June-Developing Mythology
July-Developing a History
August-Increasing Your Productivity (Scheduling workshop w/prompts)
September-Short Story workshop (writing a short story)
October-Character and Plot Building month long workshop
November-Nanowrimo related workshop
December-Short Story Editing

What do you think of this list? Which workshops are you most interested in? What do you think could be better replaced by something else?
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Writing Plan 2010

January 4th 2010 13:24
So, this year one of my writing goals is to spend more time writing. I'm going to start with a goal for writing 3-5 hours a week, spending the majority of time working on fiction projects and at least one hour working on this blog.

This plan is going to be a gradual increase in the time that I spend writing. I'm starting off with a blog schedule for three out of six days of blogging, giving me an idea what needs to get done, and every Sunday I'm going to do an hour of worldbuilding


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Thoughts On The New Year

January 1st 2010 15:16
It's now 2010 and you must begin to think about how you're going to reach your goals. You need to make a plan of what you're going to do from month to month.

Here are some things to consider when making your writing plans for the New Year


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Writing Goals 2010

December 29th 2009 12:51
Last night I made up a list of writing related things that I want to get done in 2010. I'm pretty sure-but of course you can never predict what will happen for the next year-that these are all attainable goals. Some of them will be more difficult to reach than others, and most of them contribute to my 2010 WriYe goal.

Here's my list


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Hectic Holidays!

December 28th 2009 12:37
Sorry that I haven't posted in a long time... I've had barely a waking moment to myself for the last week. I've done absolutely no writing, less planning, and even less of the schoolwork that I need to get done over the holidays. I may be on my Christmas break but it doesn't feel very much like a break.

I'm at the point where I'm panicing because I've only really got two days left of my break to do whatever I want with. I really need to outline some writing goals for next year, need to get my butt back in gear in both my writing and in my school work, and I need more time. I can't believe that one of two weeks of my break has already gone by


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WriMos Part Two

December 15th 2009 02:08
A list of WriMos from May to December to keep you occupied in the coming year...

The May challenge seems to be out of a forum, so June on


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WriMos Part Two

December 14th 2009 02:08
A list of WriMos from May to December to keep you occupied in the coming year...

The May challenge seems to be out of a forum, so June on


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WriMos!

December 13th 2009 19:31
Well, there are a lot more WriMos than I've realized. In fact, I have a browser window open and full of tabs for different WriMos, so I'm going to split this up into two posts again. There are, it seems, a lot of challenges in February.

For those of you who love Nanowrimo, who love the community, the passion, all of that good stuff, there are a number of challenges that are offspring of Nanowrimo. These challenges tend to have much smaller, more close knit communities (many of the people you can find on the Nano boards come November) but they are still great people to take the challenge with


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I Wrote A Novel, Now What?

December 12th 2009 17:49
This is part of my long credits post. I've decided to divide it into two to make my life easier because I'm in a bit of a rush to get out of the house and see some friends from out of town.

Nano's I Wrote A Novel, Now What? (clicky) page includes a pretty comprehensive list of year-round challenges. It's only missing two or three, which I will link to in the second half of this post


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Exhaustion

December 5th 2009 17:44
I'm sorry to all of my loyal readers for not having posted in a couple of days. Those of you who know me in other places will know that I haven't really been on forums or much of anything. I think I'm just suffering from story exhaustion, and the struggle to get caught up on school. So for the next few days posts are likely to be short.

Right now I'm in the process of working something out with Erin, one of the lovely mods who runs WriYe (click here), something along the lines of a one month Dear Diary challenge. This would involve weekly threads and I would be posting prompts and ideas for diary posts during the month. It's either going to happen in May or June, from the looks of it


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Questions

December 3rd 2009 02:23
This isn't going to be very long because I've got two weeks of homework waiting around for me to do...

I want to know what you guys would like to see on my blog


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The End

December 1st 2009 12:21
Nanowrimo is over. Your novel may not be over, but the month is, and with any luck you got in your 50, 001 you needed to write this month. Personally I hit 250, 049 words yesterday, having written 28K in just under twelve hours. I'm pretty proud of that. Not all of it's good, but some of it is absolutely amazing.

What now, you ask? Well, any day now the 'I Wrote a Novel, Now What' page will come up on the Nanowrimo website, and the 'Big, Scary, Fun Adventures' forum will appear if all goes as it usually does. The forums, within two weeks, will be mostly dead, with only the hardcore Nanoers, the people who really love Nano and really love writing, still posting. It becomes a lot more manageable then and I find that I spend a lot more time on the forums when it goes down to that


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Praying To The Muse

November 30th 2009 17:39
Nanowrimo is over in just a few short hours and I'm almost thirty thousand words away from my goal. For those of you who have insane numbers of words to write today-I wish you luck. It's going to be a long day, a hard day, and you and I are going to have to push to make our goals, but the effort is oh so worth it.

Pray to your muse. Beg and plead with it for its blessing and its kindness. In the next few hours the last thing you need is writer's block. You need to be able to just keep going, keep going in a frenzy with one plot point, one action your character takes leading fluidly into the next. You and I need a miracle


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Dear Daddy: Four Years

November 29th 2009 12:28
Dear Daddy, November 28th 2009

It's been four years now that you've been gone. Today is the anniversary of your death. In your honour I lie here with a glass of Egg Nog, your favourite drink, Snellock, our teddy bear, and Nan's laptop writing to you by the light of five beautiful candles


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The Final Sprint

November 28th 2009 02:05
The next two days make up (for people who aren't Australian) the last weekend of November. This is a good time to pull off a couple of crazy five or seven or ten thousand word days if you're behind. Sprint, word war, cut yourself off from the outside world until you've written however much you need to to be either back on track or done.

For those of you who are ready to give up, try one last push. You might not hit fifty thousand words but if you have the determination and the faith in yourself you'll at least get a good chunk of writing done


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The Final Sprint

November 28th 2009 02:04
The next two days make up (for people who aren't Australian) the last weekend of November. This is a good time to pull off a couple of crazy five or seven or ten thousand word days if you're behind. Sprint, word war, cut yourself off from the outside world until you've written however much you need to to be either back on track or done.

For those of you who are ready to give up, try one last push. You might not hit fifty thousand words but if you have the determination and the faith in yourself you'll at least get a good chunk of writing done


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Briefness

November 27th 2009 12:51
Just a brief hello, good morning... We are entering into the final few days of Nano and I will talk more about that in another post later, but for now:

I wanted to take this time to talk to you guys. I want to ask you: has Nanowrimo changed your life? If so, how so


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Thoughts...

November 25th 2009 12:54
We are coming to the end of Nanowrimo, of November, and hopefully of our novels. It's been for many a rough November-part of a rough year-and thus it has been difficult to keep ourselves writing through the hard times.

My goal has lowered from 400K to 350K to 300K and finally to 250K, as depression and business have taken their hold on my life. The fourth anniversary of my dad's death fast approaches, and while I will not be able to say that I did better than last year, I will be able to say that I did well, that I am following my dreams as Daddy would have wanted me to


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