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In excitement for my Critique Circle offer of a trial premium membership, I want to talk about Critiques. And on my editorial calendar that I'm experimenting with for the 31 Days To A Better Blog workshop, the post for today is supposed to be highlighting an old post in my blog.

Over the last two years I've written a couple posts here and there about critiquing. I even got a volunteer who let me critique their first chapter and post the first few hundred words of their story, and the first portion of my critique, on my blog, which was great for showing a good critique and where they can be useful.

Here are two good posts posts about critiquing:

The Use Of Critiques
A Critique-my critique of someone's first few hundred words

Over the last 2 years I've critiqued a fair bit of work. I've had somewhat less of my own work critiqued, because I don't like the free queues at Critique Circle too much, being the impatient person that I am. I do use it sometimes, and I get amazing critiques, but I just don't have the patience to put an entire novel through the system because it would take at least a year. I'm excited about the premium membership trial offer, because this will allow me to, however briefly, have my own private queue which means no waiting.

I love Critique Circle (critiquecircle.com) for many reasons. The layout of the site is great; the forums, while not as active as some that I participate in, are useful. And I get to read some amazing stories, and help some amazing authors, that I would otherwise never hear of.

Critiquing others' work allows me to read their work and enjoy it, and it also allows me to help another writer get better. When I critique other people's work, especially when it is also within my genre, I see flaws in their work that I may well find in my own. This allows me to fix them and become myself a better writer.

Critiquing is fun and educational for the critiquer and its receiver. There are many ways to receive critiques, and here are three ideas:

1. Critique Circle Obviously this is one of my most recommended websites for writers. Ever. It's a great website to submit short stories to, although again with novels I don't have the patience. If you have the money to invest in a premium account, it is totally worth it. The ability to access premium forums and to start your own Queue is worth the money they ask for. It allows you to, as long as you have the credits (which you earn from critiquing), publish your stories on your own queue at any time you want.

I like CC because it's got a good layout, great writers and a strong sense of community, and it has a Tit for Tat system, which means you have to critique others' work for credits in order to earn credits yourself.

2. Short story Group This is a group devoted entirely to short stories and poetry with a critique part of it. I don't know how well it works, but it looks like a great site and the rules for the critique group make complete sense. Sadly, with the private queues I critique for, I do not have the time to devote myself properly to another critique group.

3. Beta Readers A beta reader is someone that you probably have known for a while online, who reads through and critiques all of the writing you send them, usually with a deal that you read their work and crit in response. Depending on what they're working on for you, there are different systems for this. If it's a short story, maybe you and your beta work out a deadline for you to send it to her, forcing you to write, especially if there is also a contest deadline because you are writing it for a contest and/or anthology.

If you are working on a novel, there may be a minimum of chapters to send your beta each week and a maximum. I am sure there are as many variations on this idea as there are beta reader&writer pairings. On CC, a private queue is kind of like having a few beta readers, because they all work with you over a period of time and get to know you, another advantage to premium membership.

How do you prefer to get your critiques?
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I'm Back

August 15th 2009 20:50
Anyone who commented on the posts I've made over the last few days will notice that their comments are now being responded to-and thanks to everyone who's been reading-as I am back from the cottage.

I had a great time. I did pretty much everything I wanted to do in terms of writing except outlining the pre-Nano course I have planned. I went swimming twice every day except yesterday, when I only got down to the beach once (I wish I could've gone twice though). I watched the sun rise and set on the beach, and we had lots of fun with fire.

Today I have to catch up on my Augnowrimo. For the end of this week my goal is/was 45K, and I'm currently at 37K. I hope to write 3-5K tonight and finish the rest tomorrow.

I'm also working on Bleed, the poetry collection. I'm hoping to have 30-40 poems in it by my birthday because I would like to submit it to the Youthful Wisdom Press. Having an actual publisher behind my work will help a lot with marketing it, so hopefully I'll sell a lot more copies. Due to the sensitive nature of Bleed's content, I don't intend to announce it to my friends or most of my family, but if I do sign up with Youthful Wisdom Press I will have to get my mother to sign the contract for me.

Once I've hit 50K, which I'm actually hoping to do Monday, I will be starting work on A Cutter's Journey good and proper. It's going to be research intensive, mostly finding websites that I had bookmarked on another computer but don't currently have any real access to.

Tonight I'll be posting the Sunrise on the Beach exercise. I did get pictures of the sunset, but not the sunrise; I'm going to wait until the pictures are sent to me to post my other exercises because they'll be so much better with the pictures.

I had a lot of fun, I'm so glad that I got out of the city for once, and I feel a lot better and more at peace with everything. You can expect more posting later.
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This is a list of ten things you can look forward to here on this blog over the coming year. I've been planning quite a few workshops and things to do around here to make life more interesting. I've also been debating making a forum for these workshops. Anyone who would be willing to help me run it should contact me at diannalgunn@gmail.com about it.

Here are some things you can expect to see:

1. Early Releases Of Ebooks Bleed and Myths of Tamraq will both be announced here before anywhere else. I will also be releasing a couple free PDFs of myths. A Cutter's Journey will be announced here and on its own website a week before I go to any of my regular forums and places to announce it.

2. Nanowrimo World-Building Workshop This will be a two week workshop, with a half hour exercise every day. You can expect things like building a God, building a religion, looking at architecture, looking at weather, culture, and art. It will be run in the second week and second last week of October.

3. Nanowrimo Pep Talks I will be doing a weekly pep talk for Nanowrimo once again on this blog this year, because I had lots of fun last year. I'll also be looking for a couple other Nanoers and asking them to do guest post pep talks.

4. Dear Diary Workshop This will be going on next February. I will be doing my own Dear Diary, and each day have a list of questions to consider when writing your own. More on this later, when I have a proper 'course' outline type of thing.

5. World-Building Workshop This will be a multi-post workshop, each post focusing on a different part of the world building. There will be two exercises a week. This and the following few workshops already have basic outlines, and I'm seriously considering starting a forum for the different workshops on this blog.

6. Religion-Building Workshop This is another multi-post workshop which will be six weeks long, one exercise per week. It will cover how I usually build my religions and have various questions to ask. One of the exercises will be myth-building.

7. God-Building Workshop The Gods are characters too. This will be a four post workshop, two posts each over two weeks, about how to create a God.

8. Culture-Building Workshop This will be a six week workshop like the Religion one, with exercises focusing on art, myth, music and language.

9. Character-Building Workshop This workshop will be like the others, showing how I develop characters.

10. Plot-Building Workshop This workshop will cover various ways to build plot, including my reviews on two or three different methods and an overview of my own personal method.

These and much more will be coming over the next year. Thinking about it, I will be creating a forum in October which will have sub-forums for each workshop so that people who do the workshops at any time can discuss them.

Thanks for reading,
~Dianna
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2 Year Blogaversary

August 13th 2009 23:40
This is my official two year blogaversary for Fictional Worlds. Today, that is. So I'm writing a special post to talk about the last two years of my writing.

When I first came here, I had never had a poem published. I was completely unknown, unheard of, and no, I could not be found on Google. But I did have one good thing going for me: a talent and passion for writing


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Best Of...

July 30th 2009 05:34
So. My two-year anniversary of blogging is coming up. (Agust 13th) I've decided that on the date itself I will be doing a special post, thanking those who have inspired me since I came here, talking about why I blog etc. etc. It will also have links to some of my best posts since January.

I'm going to do four posts, total, in relation to this. Each one will contain 10 of my favourite posts from a certain time period since I've been here


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Dear Diary 14

July 16th 2009 08:07
Dear Diary,

I've had another long day of fighting. But I fight for my sister. She's far enough away now that they won't catch her, but I fight because I still fear. I fight for the men, women and children of Appollinia who won't stand a chance if the army gets past us. I fight for my friends, my family, and my men. I fight for many reasons, and I will not abandon the fight, but I grow so tired of it


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Developing Your Voice

July 8th 2009 23:20
I often see writers on various forums asking the same questions. Usually they're questions about things like chapter length, pacing, character building-all those important things. One of the most frequent questions asked isn't specifically about your story though-it's about developing your voice.

Writers ask 'How does one develop their voice


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Working Towards Your Goals

July 3rd 2009 12:51
As writers we must set goals. Without knowing where we want to go, how are we supposed to get there? Especially considering that writing can be such a vicious industry-when we're going for professional publication, we have to be twice as willing to do the work as when we're writing for friends or family.

But once we've written our goals, how do we push ourselves to achieve them


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Learning

January 17th 2009 03:52
Writing is in large part a learning process. A writer needs to be open to new things; this is why we have classes and workshops and books about writing. Not all things will work for you, this is true. We're all different. You probably won't find a class that's absolutely perfect for you. A method won't always work.

But if you don't try new things, how can you possibly know? Everything changes; our writing should too. Let's take the example of a well known author, JK Rowling of the Harry Potter series


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Some Highlights

December 25th 2008 05:26
Today I'm going to highlight some of my favourite things to read. The first few are going to be actual books that I've loved and read more than once; the last few are going to be blog entries geared specifically towards writers. Reading for the cold winter months: curl up with a good book under your favourite blanket-don't we all just love it?

For those of you who have gotten Christmas money, some books to consider


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What makes a writer?

December 12th 2008 06:31
I've gone over this before, but I was reading a thread on Forward Motion earlier and it's been a while, so I felt like writing about this topic.

What makes a writer in my mind is someone who loves to write. Someone who can't help themselves; they just need to do it like most people need to breath. Writing is a passion, writing is a love; when the going gets tough we still keep going. Writers love to do what they do, and are willing to work at it


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When Everything Is Just Too Much

October 4th 2008 23:28
So let me tell you something. School is stressing me out; I'm trying to force myself to go but it isn't working very well. Things at home aren't pleasant either. I'm stressed; so stressed that I've been sick on and off for two weeks now. Nanowrimo is on the horizon.

It's times like these when anybody-writer or otherwise-starts to wonder about all their obligations and if they're worth it. It's times like these when normally I would abandon the blog for weeks at a time; I'm trying not to. It's sort of working. It's times like these when we just want to throw in the towel


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