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Prompt: Hatred

October 19th 2008 16:26
Hatred
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You hate me;
You will not say it
But I can tell by the look in your eyes-
You hate me,
Do you wish that I would die?

You hate me
For all that I am
And all that you can never be;
Your eyes are those of jealousy.

You hate me,
For what you say
That I have done wrong,
In the end,
You've agreed all along-
You're just so afraid
To be real.

You hate me
Because I am free
To be who I want to be,
Because noone and nothing
Will ever hold me back,
I will not be held down,
I will not be led off track.

You hate me,
Because I am moving forward
Reaching for what I truly want
Doing all that I can
To be who I want to be;
Because I am aware
Of my path
And I don't care
How difficult it may be.

You hate me,
Because you live in fear
Fear of breaking the mold,
Of being hated
For being like me;
Because I fear only
To be trapped like you.

So hate me;
But remember,
I would hate to be you.
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Comment by katyzzz

October 19th 2008 22:25
Very powerful words, Dianna, you can move mountains, but give it some time, you've the rest of your life ahead of you.

Comment by Kleonaptra

October 20th 2008 00:07
Too muddled to prompt back this morning, and Im just in awe of your poem - utterly magnificent.

Comment by Dianna G

October 20th 2008 23:57
Katyzzz,

I do-but then again, maybe I don't. Who can say when life begins or ends?

~Dianna

Kleo,

I know that feeling-and why thank you. I like this one too.

~Dianna

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