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Fictional Worlds - October 2008

Prompt: Destruction

October 21st 2008 00:52
Destruction
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I'm a ship
Set to self-destruct,
Myself I cut
Let flow the blood.

Self-destruction
My salvation
My bittersweet suicide,
Succmbing to eternal night.

I can take you with me,
But I'd rather go alone;
You don't need to see
The lengths of my destruction.

Cut,
Watch the blood run down my arm;
Pills,
Feel myself fading away-
All I am is self destruction,
Just a ticking bomb,
Set to go off when I'm all alone
And when there's nothing left
To destroy.
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Comment by katyzzz

October 21st 2008 02:13


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Sounds a bit grim to me.

Comment by Dianna G

October 21st 2008 04:03


I Wish This Was 42
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Katyzzz,

Aren't you used to my grimness by now?

~Dianna

Comment by Kleonaptra

October 21st 2008 23:03


Kalikapsychosis
My poetry muse seems to be on vacation, so even though its a magnificent prompt I cant muster a word...
As usual, you took all the best ones!

Comment by Dianna G

October 22nd 2008 00:10


I Wish This Was 42
Fictional Worlds
Kleo,

That sucks; those evil muses when they run away!

And thanks, I like this one too.

~Dianna

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