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Prompt: Despair

October 18th 2008 04:27
Despair
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Despair:
All that I am,
Filling me,
Destroying me.

Despair
My eternal companion,
The one I am stuck with;
I cannot shake it,
I give up,
I cannot go on like this.

Despair
Endless
I give up,
If that's what you want.

I can't take this anymore,
I'm sick of living like this,
The hidden truths
Behind my web of lies,
I'm so sorry
About what I never told you.

When I leave,
Please know,
You never hurt me;
It was everyone
And everything else
Around me in the darkness-
And my constant companion,
Despair.
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Okay, so it's clunky. I'm having a bad day for creativity.

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Comment by katyzzz

October 18th 2008 06:56
I think it is beautifully expressed ~Dianna. Amazing. So much wisdom from one so young.

Comment by Dianna G

October 18th 2008 19:50
Katyzzz,

Thankies!

~Dianna

Comment by Kleonaptra

October 19th 2008 01:58
Despair,
your near.

I knew you were,
you never left.

My old friend,
how could I have thought,

you'd leave me,
when you love me,

like I
love you.

The embrace stings
your claws rip at me

the pain is welcome,
in your arms....

again...
Im alive.

I always find it hard after your turn Dianna....You seem to gather up the best words!

Comment by Dianna G

October 19th 2008 02:29
Kleo,

It was beautiful-and I'm not particularly proud of mine for this prompt. It wasn't a very good day.

~Dianna

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