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Prompt: Just Kill Me

November 27th 2008 11:51
A friend of mine-very close online friend-recently got dumped and may or may not live through the aftermath of the breakup, so here goes:
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Just Kill Me

Just kill me
For ever dreaming I could be happy
Take my heart and make it bleed
'Til there's nothing left to see
But a stain on a dead woman's
Empty chest.

Just kill me
For ever thinking I could smile again
And have it be real for more than a moment;
Please rip my heart out
I don't want it there anymore.

Just kill me
Make my heart your trophy

It hurts too much for me
It'll look good
On your mantelpiece.

Just kill me
For thinking I could be happy
For more than just a second
A short second
Of a short day.

Just kill me,
You know you want
To see me bleed.
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Prompt: Fallen

October 26th 2008 22:08
Fallen
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Her wings are gray
Her eyes are too
And full of tears;
Her face is full of shadows
Hidden fears.

She is a fallen angel,
She tried her best
But to no avail,
And so here she lies,
Kicked in the dirt and the mud
For the simple sin
We all commit.

For they say it is a sin to love;
Though I believe it is not,
And if you were to see her
In all her broken glory
Surely then
You would believe me.
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Prompt: Escape

October 23rd 2008 00:51
Escape
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I just want to
Escape from reality;
This is a dark day,
All my life caves in around me.

Leave it all behind,
All the problems,
Every worry,
Every bit of pain.

When it's turned to
Sheer agony
I run away
Into a world with no more pain;
My blood is running
I am escaping
Into beautiful, peaceful death.

I'm on the edge
I am breaking
It's too bad
There's nobody left
To save me....
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Prompt: Mess with me...

October 22nd 2008 02:14
Mess with me
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Mess with me


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Prompt: Destruction

October 21st 2008 00:52
Destruction
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I'm a ship


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Prompt: Hatred

October 19th 2008 16:26
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Prompt: What I Have To Do

October 19th 2008 04:46
What I Have To Do
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Darkness engulfs me


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Prompt: Despair

October 18th 2008 04:27
Despair
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Despair


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Prompt: Slipping

October 16th 2008 17:26
Slipping
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I just wanted to tell you


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Prompt: Best Friend: Poem

October 9th 2008 00:58
Best Friends
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When Everything Is Just Too Much

October 4th 2008 23:28
So let me tell you something. School is stressing me out; I'm trying to force myself to go but it isn't working very well. Things at home aren't pleasant either. I'm stressed; so stressed that I've been sick on and off for two weeks now. Nanowrimo is on the horizon.

It's times like these when anybody-writer or otherwise-starts to wonder about all their obligations and if they're worth it. It's times like these when normally I would abandon the blog for weeks at a time; I'm trying not to. It's sort of working. It's times like these when we just want to throw in the towel


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