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Pain Of Love

November 30th 2008 09:31
Your eyes so cold
They haunt me in my dreams;
Throughout all the years,
My darkest memories.

I hate you but I love you
For all that you have done;
Could you not
Have just accepted my love?

You knew it was there,
And perhaps this is why
You became so cruel
With every harsh word
I fell apart
Knowing you could never feel the same.

I don't know why
But I still love you
In the depths of my broken heart;
Please don't take it,
Don't break it,
Because if it breaks one more time
It will shatter-
And will be the end

Of my short life.
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No idea where it came from or who inspired it, but hey, I kind of like it.
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