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Worldbuilding

December 10th 2008 20:53
I write dark fantasy; and in fantasy there is usually quite a bit of extensive worldbuilding that is done in preparation for the book/series you're writing. This can at times be tedious-it can also be incredibly fun. The following things are some things to seriously look into when building your world:

Geography mapping it out is a very, very good idea; you need to know where people are going. If you're doing journey fantasy, you need to know where the people are journeying too. If your story takes place in a city, you're going to need the little details of the city, even if your character doesn't bring them up in terms of narration.


Cultures what kind of cultures do you have? What races are there other than humans? Are there races other than humans? Varying amounts of detail prove necessary depending on just how much time is spent in your world and where in the world the time is spent. Different people go to different lengths.

Keep in mind that a lot of these details are for you and you only; they don't need to all be put into a book.

History you want to know the history of your world for multiple reasons. The first of which is it will play a huge part in the overall culture. The wars, poverty, plagues, and everything else the culture has gone through will play major roles in the way people act even centuries later. You don't need to do an extremely detailed history, but you want some sort of a timeline of the past several centuries, even if it only lists the big things.

Again, a lot of these details are just for your use; you can write about the world in more depth if you know more about it. The quality of your writing will often show the quality of your knowledge of the world in which you do the writing.


Religion religion may not play an important part in your book, or in the lives of your characters. However, it is important to establish a few basic details about religion in the culture they live in-like how much/little effect it has over the majority of people. You can also get plenty of new novel ideas from the religion itself (and the history) to write in the same world.

Class/Gender Rules developing a class system and figuring out how the genders are treated-how equal they are, in other words-can be incredibly important. It can also be fun. And it's another part of world building that can always spring forth new ideas for new novels in the same world. This is something that needs to be followed. You can't start bending the rules.

There are several other things, but those are a few of the most important ones. For a lot of great writing information, especially on the front of worldbuilding, check out this site:

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Writing Rants: Beginnings

December 9th 2008 18:56
Back onto my fantasy rants... shall be fun. (For me, at least.) I've been wandering Critique Circle of late (critiquecircle.com) and have read a couple first chapters of novels. This is what I've noticed that they've done wrong, and how to do it right. This one applies to all novels but is specifically focused on fantasy, because that's the genre I write and thus know the most about.

Exposition I read one first/second chapter story in which the very first sentence was great, as was the story idea. Unfortunately, there was quite a bit of exposition; it read slowly, all in overly detailed sentences and paragraphs. It drove me almost crazy, but I finished the crit and the chapters.

Don't do this. Yes, we should discover a few things right away. No, we don't need your character's life story; it can be more evenly spread out through the story, brought up when something that brings back memories or is otherwise significant to your character's past. Save it for later! We want action at the beginning-an action scene that shows us a few things about the lives of the characters and the world in which they live.

The first paragraph The first paragraph is especially important for drawing a character in-even the first sentence is incredibly important. You want something that will lure readers in-exposition doesn't cut it 95% of the time. Again, save the introspection and exposition for later on, when the readers are already deep into the story.

You want short, efficient sentences. Not scenes of sunrises over oceans, not a long description of your character's appearance. You're looking for something that's going to bring a reader in and instantly make them want to learn more. There are plenty of good ways to start your story. I'm probably going to do something examining opening lines of various books sometime in the near future.

Empathy You want to, in your first paragraph and definitely your first page, give your readers a reason to empathize with your characters. You want to identify something about them, something about the way they feel; even if you're only saying that they're running from something, or that they have a dark past. You want to reveal just enough about your characters that they want to read more, that they empathize.

You may be writing in a world entirely unlike our own, and we know you want to show off this pretty world; but we need to be drawn into the story, and most of the time people are drawn into the story by the characters in it. So you need to establish those, with hints of the world around them.

Reading Material If you want to read some great openings, here are a few books I would recommend:

-The Ordinary Princess, if you can find it; a great book with an amusing opening.
-A Series of Unfortunate Events, the entire series so far as I've read is quite amusing. I really like it. And each book has its own great opening.
-Anything by Terry Pratchett, but specifically 'Wee Free Men' or 'Thief of Time' (which are on my bookshelf.)
-Sidney Sheldon Tell Me Your Dreams (or anything by him)
-And Lois Lowry, The Giver or Gathering Blue.

For the next one, you get to pick from the following:

-True Love rant
-Festivals Rant (in honor of Christmas)

I'm also contemplating doing a series on mythological creatures, the first of which would be about either Elves or Vampires.
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Gratuitous Sex/Violence Rant

August 31st 2008 07:59
I did say I'd get into this one eventually. And we all know how much I love gratuitous sex and violence... in fanfiction. This is purely personal opinion, as are all of my upcoming rants. Take my advice with a grain of salt. I'm not the best writer out there, I'm not a genius, I'm not very accomplished in the writing world as of yet. But here goes nothing...

What Qualifies As Gratuitous? If you're writing it because you want to, not because it advances the plot, it's gratuitous. It does not need to be in the story (and sometimes whole stories can be written without sex and without violence-or with minimal violence) it is just there because you wanted to write it, not because it adds anything. Some people would argue that everything a person writes is because they want to write.

It's true, to some extent. We do choose our stories to an extent; but we also know what furthers a character's development, or the plot, or what have you. Writers instinctively know where every scene and action takes your character.

If it does not change anything or reveal anything, it is not necessary. It is gratuitous.

Where does Gratuitous belong? In fanfiction; personal writing exercises; not in published material. In my opinion there CAN be an element of the gratuitous in any story. Perhaps you didn't need to go into quite so much detail in the fight scene or sex scene (in fact, fade to black is perfectly good in just about any sex scene, and minimal detail in almost any fight), but you did, and you did it well so it didn't bog the story down.

This is fine. I don't mind knowing exactly how the characters felt, how every kiss moved them, as long as it's well written. In such a way that it enchants you-like in Anne Rice books. Looking at them objectively, they don't need to be so long. There doesn't have to be that luxurious detail of every touch between two characters, or of the Mayfair house. Or of Lestat, or Gabrielle, or Armand... but it defines her books and it belongs. It doesn't stand out as gratuitous-even though some of it probably is.

How does one make the gratuitous fit? I would say that if you're going to have gratuitous sex or violence, you have to make it flow. You can't spend twenty pages describing the bloody battle and then one describing the healer's tent. If you're going to have more detail than strictly necessary, you have to make that consistent. Your character has to be observant-it has to fit with the voice, the pace, the story.

Some scenes you know are meant to be written in more or less detail in order to serve their purpose. If you're giving a scene more detail than it absolutely needs, you need to do that with more than one scene, so that the reader doesn't automatically go 'oh, this person really likes describing gore but hates writing about love'. You need to make sure that the readers aren't thinking about you, the writer, but about the character.

The flow and voice still remain important, as does characterization and other fun things. You cannot sacrifice them in the name of Porn Without Plot. That is a fatal flaw in any writer.

Keeping it sparse. If you don't have gratuitous, that's great. How do you avoid it? It takes constant questioning of yourself, of your characters, and of your story. You have to know what belongs, what is necessary to develop your characters, your world. To change that world and those characters; to direct the story on its chosen path.

This takes work. It may mean cutting out some of your favourite scenes and passages, it may mean destroying entire chapters of beautifully written prose. But if you don't want it to be consistently detailed to a large extent, then all gratuity must be cut out. This can be a painful process-so can most of editing, even writing the first draft can be painful at times. It can also be necessary.

If you want to see gratuitous done in such a way that it doesn't seem gratuitous, I recommend Anne Rice and also Lady Of The Hay. (If you can ever find the latter; it isn't a very well known book, but it's one of my Gods in the book world)

I'm going to stop writing this now. Next time, a beginnings rant, I think. What do you want, out of these three:

~Beginnings Rant
~Love Triangle Rant
~Class System Rant


Whichever has the most people wanting me to write it, I'll write it tonight or tomorrow. And sorry if this turns out to be a bunch of jumbled crap that doesn't do anyone any good-I'm new to this.
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Introducing: My Fantasy Rants

August 11th 2008 02:34
This is my own set of rants about fantasy, covering cliches and things that are overdone in fantasy. How to do things well and how they have been done badly.

For those of you that haven't read Limyaael's rants, they're all very good and there's a link in a recent post. I don't have it written down off the computer so I can't put it here, as I'm not looking at it at the moment


[ Click here to read more ]
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