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June 3rd 2009 05:13
Cut
---------------
It's just a little cut
It's not that much blood
Your words
Cut me worse.

Make me bleed
Make me believe
All your lies-
Lie is
After all
The most important word
In believe.

I promised you
I was done with this;
I am
I just wanted
To drag the blade
To bleed again.

One last time
To commemorate
All I have lost.

I gave everything
For you
I loved you
For you
I threw away
My friends
My school
My family
My past
Everything

And then you
Threw me away
Like everything I'd already lost.

It's just a little cut
I promise you
It's not much blood

When I'm six feet under
You shall see
What you
Really did to me.

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Posted By: Dianna G - Category: Poetry
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Comment by Kleonaptra

June 4th 2009 01:30


Kalikapsychosis
Your words are incredibly powerful Dianna

Comment by Dianna G

June 4th 2009 02:58


I Wish This Was 42
Fictional Worlds
Kleo,

Thank you.

~Dianna

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