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Building A Culture

October 18th 2009 16:09
Today's exercise is to designed to help you build a culture. Culture includes things like history, art, music, and language. Now, during this course you aren't going to build an extremely complex history, history of art, or language; it's simply impossible in such a short time period. But you are going to build the beginnings of a culture, enough to write a book in it without the book seeming entirely flat.

Again you're going to research cultures of the world around you. We've looked at religions with Gods similar to yours, and those are probably the cultures you're going to want to look at as well; so quickly search up a couple websites about each culture. Don't use Wikipedia, unless it's a mini-Wiki (likely to be more reliable), because anyone can edit Wikipedia and it is not always a reliable source.

1. What kind of cultures have evolved in climates similar to yours? Name each and describe each in a paragraph; include things like how they tell stories through the generations, what they do at the beginning of each new season (there was typically some sort of celebration for each) and what basic rituals are around food (preparing, cooking, and eating it).

2. What major differences are there between your world and ours that would affect cultural development? This includes things like magic and direct appearances of the deities of your world.

3. What are three challenges most people in your world face? (Things like common poverty, extreme winters throughout most of the world, or frequent droughts can be put here. It can also include things like controlling wild magic that courses through the land, struggling to obey a God that will literally torture them if they don't, things like that.)

4. How might these challenges make people in your world different from in ours?

5. What kind of religion does this culture have? How might this affect things like gender roles and class/caste?

If you only have male deities, or only have female deities, then obviously one gender is going to be seen by society as better than another. If your deities ask that their people help the poor, the average middle-class person might be more friendly with those below them-or not. If your deities say that the poor are worthless and should be enslaved, voila, you have an entirely different culture.

Think about whether or not the Gods you have created endorse things like war, slavery, torture and death penalties for criminals. What they have endorsed will make a big difference in the culture you are creating.

6. How is myth/legend/history passed down from one generation to the next?

This could be complicated or simple. It could be consistently one tradition for the last several hundred years-oral, pictoral, or written-or it could have changed. Perhaps early in the milennia it was pictoral, people drawing pictures on rocks to communicate-there may have been many reasons for this, including different cultures meeting and melding with different languages-and then it shifted to oral, and around the time your story begins, it is becoming written. It is unlikely that it was always written.

Think about the impact this would have. Myths would change more in an oral tradition than a pictoral or written tradition over time; words would be left out here and there, and given enough time, one story may become another one entirely.

7. How are various classes/castes different from each other?

The difference is unlikely to be purely about money. Factors in class may include such things as skin colour (if there are different races) or cultural heritage (if they are partially from someplace else), your parents, and things as arbitrary as hair colour and eye colour. The class you are born into will probably influence how much power you have. It will probably affect how much land you can or do own, how much money you can or do make/have, how much influence you do or do not have over other people.

In your world the poorest class may not have any rights to own land, and may indeed only be allowed to rent land. Or perhaps there is slavery, and that is the lowest class; in history slaves were commonly not considered to even be people. Perhaps a boy has much more power than a girl, or the other way around. If you are born into one family, you might be rich, own a lot of land, and be able to influence government policy-whereas if you are born into another, you might be poor and work for a rich person doing something like cleaning their houses or cooking their meals, and be forced to spend (by a law not allowing you to own your own property) the small wage they give you mostly on renting out their land.

I suggest you take a look at some older class systems and how they were enforced as you are making your decisions. Also figure out what their releases are-when the lowest class is allowed a little bit of freedom for a day or two. These things keep the system in flow. A day that the entire kingdom celebrates and that everyone has off makes the general population happier.

For more information to help you build your world, check out these rants by Limyaael:

Creating A Historical Background Of Ideas For Your World 1 on creating a history of ideas; think stories, think myth, think art. This is a great rant.

Creating A Historical Background Of Ideas For Your World 2 the second half of this wonderful rant.

Class/Caste Systems I believed I've already linked you guys to this one but you might want to read it again while you're working on this exercise.

Daily Prompt

The love of my life (500 words; can be any character's PoV, novel-related or not.)
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Recommended Reading Day 3

September 16th 2009 00:33
Today's recommended reading is actually two entries, two parts of one rant. It's an excellent rant useful for anyone writing their novel in a city, especially those who are creating the city for their story:

City Rant (Part The First)

City Rant (Part The Second)
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Rant: Building Gods

January 11th 2009 11:48
If your book has a very important religious aspect, you need to carefully build up the mythology and the deities as characters almost. For my work on the Jihad series, I've been building up Loki for the last few days.

Loki is originally a Norse god of mischief. In Norse mythology he was often presented as evil, almost, with the pranks he would play on the other Gods; but in dire times of need he pulled through and saved the Gods. This happened on more than one occasion.

I have attempted to recreate that with my own turn on it, Loki being much more powerful than anyone suspects; though he is a God of mischief, in the Jihad series he plays a very serious role. His is one of the most important parts in the series, outshone by only two other deities and of course the main 'group' of humans and other species.

The following are some important things to consider while developing Gods.

What role do they play? What are their powers? What do they control and how do they do this? Do they play tricks, or are they serious? When it comes to religion, it's easy to fall into stereotypes; they are everywhere in our own society. The Earth Goddess, the Sun God, the Moon Goddess, the sea God. These are Greek and Roman myths, and they are the most common to get transported into fantasy worlds.

Do something different; if your culture is different, your Gods should be, too. In the Jihad series, there are the following Gods:

Loki, who I've explained above; the Triad, which consists of Bannon, Rasie, and Raychel, honour, truth, and healing; Dracon, the dragon God, Talyn, Loki's 'brother' and a God of mischief in his own right; and The Lady, the mysterious Goddess of death.

There is no God or Goddess of the sun, the moon, or the sea; Talyn has some power over Earth and Loki and the Lady share the night, but those are not their main attributes. Bannon is in part God of the sun, but again, this isn't a main attribute. The Gods should resemble the people; they should be based off of common things in the world, have power over things that matter to the people.

How are they described in myth? Loki is the example for this one. How do your people describe their Gods in myth? Gods and Goddesses in traditional mythologies such as Greek and Roman had complex personalities. Loki was a jerk normally, but he would be there when they really needed him. Zeus was a strong leader but weak in faithfulness to his wife, Hera. Hera was intensely jealous; the last two are Greek.

Study old mythologies and base yours off of them-in the way of giving them the same or similar complexities, not just having them be stereotypical Gods and Goddesses who are mostly a blank canvas. The more active a part religion plays in your novel or series, the more you need to know.

How do they relate to one another? Gods do not exist in a vacuum. If you've created a religion with only one God, then this is an invalid point. But odds are that you're writing a typical fantasy religion with more than one. These Gods need to interact-after all, they run the world, do they not? They can't simply rule in isolation.

Artemis and Apollo were twins in Greek mythology; Persephone ate seven pomegranate seeds and thus was forced to spend seven months each year in the afterlife with Hades. Zeus seemed to love Hera, but at the same time was sleeping around; Hera did love Zeus, and was a very jealous wife.

In my own world for Jihad, Loki and The Lady have a mysterious bond; Bannon, Raychel, and Rasie are like brother and sisters. Talyn has a brotherlike bond with Loki, and a friendship of sorts with The Lady. They all have tense friendships with Dracon, who has made mistakes which led up to the current war and influenced it largely.

Build strong, complex relationships between your Gods and not only will you find yourself with many more potential plots-you'll find yourself with stronger characters and a much more interesting story.

What are their relationships with their followers? Fantasy usually uses the typical distant Gods; and then they become not distant for one reason or another, usually just in time to save the characters' butts. But what if Gods were much closer to their followers?

For example, my version of Loki would occasionally appear to one of his followers who worked in prostitution, and at the end of the night leave them a large sum of money. Zeus would sleep with anyone he could get his hands on. Bannon, Raychel, and Rasie rarely appear to their followers, but when they do, they help them greatly. Dracon only appears to his 'chosen', Nidhras or half dragons, but he is very close to them. The Lady also rarely appears to anyone but her 'chosen', but they no longer trust her.

So much can be done with this. Bloody wars have been fought for Gods and religion before-some of the bloodiest in history. But what about if we really knew the Gods, connected with them intimately? It would make the wars even that much more intense; people would be fighting for beings they actually know. They would be defending beings they had seen with their own eyes.

I think many fantasy authors are afraid to have Gods who are anything but black and white, and many are afraid to fully acknowledge the reality of a Holy War.

Links:

Really Long Link - Limyaael's rant on Gods

Really Long Link - A page with information on Loki per Norse mythology

Really Long Link - A page with information on Zeus.

Thanks for reading. Currently I'm working on laying out a fair bit of planning for the Jihad series, which has grown into quite a long one. My workshop has also officially started.

~Dianna
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Some Highlights

December 25th 2008 05:26
Today I'm going to highlight some of my favourite things to read. The first few are going to be actual books that I've loved and read more than once; the last few are going to be blog entries geared specifically towards writers. Reading for the cold winter months: curl up with a good book under your favourite blanket-don't we all just love it?

For those of you who have gotten Christmas money, some books to consider


[ Click here to read more ]
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