All of this

All of this I have thrown away
Just for you.
All of this I have destroyed
Just for you.

All of this:
Myself
My heart
My soul
My life.

All destroyed,
Just for you.

All of this-
My future
My happiness
My love
My truth.

All thrown away,
Just for you.

Just for that one moment in your arms-
Do you see it now,
How you have ruined me?

I did not wish to;
Did I truly have a choice?
Completely destroyed...
I am nothing now,
Nothing without love...

Now there is nothing left

But an empty shell
Pouring endless words
Of despair.

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Comment by katyzzz

July 4th 2008 06:18

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We don't need the love of a lover,
All we need, now, is to love ourselves,
The past is always behind us,
The future will beckon us still,
Don't give your heart to another,
Always keep some for yourself,
We owe not what to another,
We need it just for ourself,
Cherish the love you must give you,
Throw crumbs from another to birds,
Sup at the table of life and its offerings.
That way you'll always do well.

Let not any other take from us,
Our love for life and ourselves,
We must bury the past that's behind us,
And go forth to life,
And away from Hell.

You must make your own journey through life,
Depend not on the love of another,
Love and Embrace what life has to offer,
Not berate others for what's our own Hell.

Youth carries with it redemption,
And new opportunities as well,
Soon those wounds will but heal,
And we will feel well,
To take on new pathways,
To freedom as well.

~Well done Dianna~

Comment by Dianna G

July 8th 2008 03:58

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Katyzzz,

Nice poem.

Love... well the problem is if you've tried to find it on your own, the light that is, but you can't guide yourself through the tunnel alone, what do you do then?

~Dianna

Comment by katyzzz

July 8th 2008 05:50

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That's a good question, Dianna, a skilled counsellor, perhaps, a sympathetic medical practitioner, a trustworthy relative, how about grandpa? You are doing better than you think, just keep trying, time is a great healer, and as you get older you'll feel differently about things.

Sad things can happen to teenagers, but you're obviously very bright and you should get there.

~love and sympathy~

katyzzz

Comment by Dianna G

July 18th 2008 13:12

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Katyzzz...

I finally read this. I've been thinking. I've been thinking.

But I'm not sure where that thought was going...

I've been falling off the deep end and the only thing that stops it is to hurl myself into my work full force...

~Dianna

Comment by katyzzz

July 18th 2008 20:35

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That energy is well directed. Eventually, the bad things will pass and you'll think to yourself, "how can I have wasted my time and energy that way?" - not the work, the tough emotions.

It can be very hard being female in some ways, we can become hapless victims, sadly.

Keep up the hard work, walk often and seek the sun, well done.

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