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Until The Day I Die

January 5th 2008 15:36
Until the day I die,
I will always love you;
I know that now.

I cannot forget you
I cannot forget how you left
Nor the darkness that has engulfed me since.

There are many things about you
That I just can't forget
Like the day you left me
The day I first feared for your life...

The day I said what I thought to be
My last goodbye
But now I know
You're always by my side

Even if only in spirit,
Death cannot completely part us,
I love you,
And somehow I know
That you love me.

I've lost you
But someday I know

I will find you again
I will see you

And I will not rest
Searching for you
Until the day I stand at your grave
Or until the day I die.
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Comment by Lidia

January 6th 2008 09:59
This is how I feel about the death of my Mum...I know death can't part us from our loved ones. Thanks for sharing it. it's a strong poem.

Comment by Dianna G

January 6th 2008 18:21
Lidia,

Thanks This poem has everything to do with Daddy, but also with Jordan.

Jordan was a guy I fell head over heels in love with in 2006, and he completely disappeared. I haven't seen him in over six months. We were the best of friends, and then he vanished, and I've only seen him twice-both times he said he hated me.

Thanks for your comment.
~Dianna

Comment by Dianna G

January 8th 2008 20:05
...I don't have, out of over two hundred poems, one that's happy.

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