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Fictional Worlds - March 2010

The Last Day

March 31st 2010 13:17
Today is the last day of Nanoedmo and of March. It's also the last day of this editing workshop.

To those of you who have finished or will finish by the end of today-congratulations. You've come a long way this month and done a lot of hard work. Give yourself a reward.

To those of you who haven't finished your second draft and who probably won't have finished your second draft by the end of the day, don't beat yourself up. Just keep working at it, give yourself a pat on the back for what you've done, set a new completion date, and work at it bit by bit, day by day. Don't give up on your novel if it's a complete mess-as long as you still love your story, it's worth rewriting until you've done it justice.

I'll be continuing my own editing, hoping to finish my second draft by April fifteenth. The workshop is over, but you can expect to see updates here throughout the coming month on how my novel's coming along, and you're welcome to comment here and let me know how yours is doing.

Thanks for reading.
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Final March Prompt

March 30th 2010 12:11
Today I want you to write to the following prompt:

Falling out of a tree.

Go crazy with it, and if you end up with something awesome, I'd love to read it.
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Almost Closing Time

March 29th 2010 12:06
NanoEdmo, and the month of March, is almost over. With any luck, and minimal interference, you should be finishing off your second draft, almost ready to write 'the end' once again. During these final days, you're going to be concerned with how your novel will end, reaching an ending that will give both you and your readers satisfaction.

If you're writing a stand alone book, read through your rewritten chapters and make sure there aren't any plot threads that have been dropped. If there are, pick them up again and finish them off. Write a satisfying end to the story you've been writing, but don't end your book on a static note. Just because the evil overlord has been defeated or the two characters have been married doesn't mean that your world and your characters won't face future challenges. It's not 'happily ever after'. Your characters are living, breathing people and they will continue to be so after the book is done.

If you're working on a book that's part of a series (and not the last book) then remember to tie up the book's individual plot and leave the main plot at a point where you-and the readers-are willing to wait to find out what happens next. If your characters are on an epic journey, then end with them in a fairly safe place, perhaps sleeping their last night in safety before they continue on their way. Or end them having just overcome a major challenge and preparing for the one ahead. There are many ways to end it, but you want two things-story satisfaction, and a curiosity about what happens next.

And if, like me, you're still deeply entrenched in the middle of your second draft, don't worry too much about it. Life probably got in the way with various distractions-sick friends or family (or sick you), extra things to be done at work, big projects at school-and you shouldn't beat yourself up for attending to those things before your novel. For most of you, this isn't your job; you're only accountable to yourself, and beating yourself up does more harm than good.

For those of you who have finished editing your novel or are very close to the end-congratulations. You've come a long way from the messy first draft to the mostly mess-free second draft. Once your job is done, give yourself a reward, a fancy dinner, a sweet dessert, a walk through the park, a hot bath: whatever makes you smile.

For those of you who are in the middle with me-just change the date. I plan on having my second draft, and some minor edits to the first couple of chapters of that second draft, done by the end of April. Come with me on my journey to reach the end of our books. This 'workshop' is over and the posts about editing will be less frequent, but I will be regularly updating and if I find any more cool links, I'll send them your way.

No matter where you are in your book or on the planet, no matter who you are, I'd just like to say thank you for reading this blog. I hope that you'll stay with me throughout my journey as a writer and throughout your own.
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Just Something To Point Out

March 28th 2010 14:18
I'm popping my head briefly back in here this weekend to bring to you a wonderful blog post. It's at Problogger, and not only does it have great advice for blogging, it points out some things about our society's treatment of body image.

Dear Blogger: Do You Hate Your Customer?
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Simple Editing Exercise and Update

March 25th 2010 12:04
Sorry I didn't post yesterday. I've been really tired this week. My editing is coming along slowly but nicely, my words for the year are 84K plus change, far behind where I wanted to be but still better than last year at this time.

Today I've got a simple exercise for you to do


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Prompt Time!

March 23rd 2010 12:58
Sorry I didn't post yesterday; let's just say the weekend was eventful, shall we?

If you're terribly behind, I am too, but rather than dwell on how behind you are, use this prompt to get the words flowing and then go on to start your editing for the day


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Three Great Editing Links

March 19th 2010 12:35
Some more great links for you:

~He said, she said: thoughts on dialogue is a post on Magical Words talking about dialogue. It's got several interesting points to consider when editing your own dialogue scenes


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Editing Exercise Two: Dialogue Tags

March 18th 2010 12:06
Today's exercise is about dialogue tags.

You want dialogue to stand on its own. Dialogue tags shouldn't have to explain how your character said it. A reader should be able to tell who's speaking fairly easily without any dialogue tags at all, but you also don't want to go too long in a scene without dialogue tags


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I've seen this book recommended in at least a dozen different places, so I had the library order a copy for me. It arrived at the end of last week and of course, I've already finished reading it.

Self Editing for Fiction Writers is a book designed to help you read your work like an editor. Written by two editors, Renni Browne and Dave King, the book introduces you to several of their own editing techniques


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Other Prompt

March 16th 2010 12:19
This week's prompt is to write a story/scene in which a child (male or female) accidentally discovers a dark secret in their family's past.
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Pep Talk and Competition

March 15th 2010 12:19
Today starts off a brand new week, and it's time to look at the month ahead. You might still be struggling with writing a new opening for your book, or you might be almost to the end of your second draft already. If you're in the latter position, I want to give you a big pat on the back. If you're in the former, don't worry, because that's pretty much where I am too.

Before you start your editing today, make a comprehensive list of all the things you wanted to do when editing your first draft. Check off all the things that you've done so far-things like writing a new first chapter, editing your first few scenes, whatever you managed to do that you wanted to do-and then circle all the things you want to do in the next week


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3 More Editing Links

March 12th 2010 12:46
Here are a couple more links I hope help you with your editing:

~Reworking Infodumps Workshop this is an article/exercise by Lazette Gifford talking about the perils of infodumping when introducing your novel's world and story. It also has an exercise designed to help you tackle infodumps and make them into readable prose


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Falling Behind

March 11th 2010 13:09
Unfortunately life has gotten in the way of my editing this month. I've begun the second draft of my novel, writing a new first chapter-but life has stalled me. Between a crippled grandmother, old friends coming back into the picture, and my general exhaustion, my started second draft is sitting on my USB key gathering dust.

Luckily, being a student in Toronto (I don't know about this in other places) I've got next week off of school, freeing up several hours of five days of my week. Some of this time will be devoted to catching up on school-my editing isn't the only thing I've fallen behind on-but I'm hoping to get most of my second draft done during this time period


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Instead of today's update, I've decided to write a book review of the book I finished last night, George R. R. Martin's a Game of Thrones.

The first thing I'll say about this book is that if you aren't prepared to commit yourself to a lot of reading, don't even start it. It's the first book in a series, and this book alone is eight hundred and seven pages


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Prompt One

March 9th 2010 12:20
Your goal for this month might be all about editing, but it's always good to keep the writing juices flowing. To help you keep writing, each week there will be a writing prompt. These are designed to be 500-1, 500 word writing exercises. They don't have to be full stories, as long as they sort of make sense.

This week, take a character from a different project than the one you're currently editing, someone who you are somewhat familiar with but who isn't quite a close friend yet. You will be writing from their point of view


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Week One Pep Talk&Short Exercise

March 8th 2010 12:21
The first few days of March have passed, and the first full week of March is about to begin. You may not be where you wanted to be, but remember that there's still most of a month left.

You might also be frustrated with the big picture problems of your first draft. If you find yourself dreading the words and dreading the work, while you look through the badly written parts that you've figured out, try to find things that you like. Great scenes, great description, real emotion, realistic characterization. Underline those parts or at least make a note of them. You'll find yourself liking your work more, and you'll find that rewriting what you don't like will come to you more easily


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Three Editing Links To Help Out

March 5th 2010 12:38
Every week for the rest of this month, I'm going to post either three or five links to good articles about editing fiction, in the hopes that you'll find the information useful or at least interesting. I still haven't made a final list of websites, so if you have a link you think should be listed in one of the posts this month, please send me an email at diannalgunn@gmail.com.

On to the links for this week


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Based on what you've read and worked on so far, make a list of five words you think you overuse. You'll probably-especially in a Nanovel-find an overuse of words like 'was', 'have', 'bloody' if you have a lot of gore, 'beautiful' if your character's exploring a new world. 'Moments' is a big one for me as I've struggled to find new ways of judging time for my world.

Beside each one, when you do your work for the day, do a tally of how many times that word has been used. After you've read your chapters for the day, find a thesaurus and look up similar words. List three similar words that you are comfortable using beside each word that you overuse, and then replace each word you overuse at least once in your chapters for the day. Keep this list close to you when you're editing the rest of your novel


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A Prompt To Distract Yourself

March 2nd 2010 12:39
Your goal for this month might be all about editing, but it's always good to keep the writing juices flowing. To help you keep writing, each week there will be a writing prompt. These are designed to be 500-1, 500 word writing exercises. They don't have to be full stories, as long as they sort of make sense.

This week, take a character from a different project than the one you're currently editing, someone who you are somewhat familiar with but who isn't quite a close friend yet. You will be writing from their point of view


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Today is the first day of March. It is also the first day of Nanoedmo, a month during which many writers work on editing and some reach for the goal of 50 hours of editing. In honour of these events, and considering the fact that I am also editing my novel this month, I decided at the beginning of this year that I would be doing an editing workshop in March.

Most writers experience some difficulties while writing their books, but for most of us, when we get past that point, we discover that writing is the easy part: rewriting is the hard part


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