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Pep Talk and Competition

March 15th 2010 12:19
Today starts off a brand new week, and it's time to look at the month ahead. You might still be struggling with writing a new opening for your book, or you might be almost to the end of your second draft already. If you're in the latter position, I want to give you a big pat on the back. If you're in the former, don't worry, because that's pretty much where I am too.

Before you start your editing today, make a comprehensive list of all the things you wanted to do when editing your first draft. Check off all the things that you've done so far-things like writing a new first chapter, editing your first few scenes, whatever you managed to do that you wanted to do-and then circle all the things you want to do in the next week.

Once you've figured out what you want to do in the next week, assign each item to one of the days this week. For example, today I'm going to be writing up a couple new versions of chapters three and four for my book and finishing the Phoenix's character questionnaire, and tomorrow I'm going to be writing up questionnaires for Loki, the Demon, and Keeran. When you make this plan, don't think too hard about when during those days you're going to do it-just know that on those days, those things need to get done. You'll find little pockets of time if you look hard enough.

While you're thinking about things to do this week-consider taking part in a little competition:

As you know, I've been working on my novel, Phoenix Falling. I've just written a new version of chapter two, and in this chapter, an Elvish woman falls down a flight of stairs. She curses when she falls, of course, but on writing this scene, I realized that my elves don't have any swear words!

So here's what I want you to do: leave a comment with a swear word here. I want it to look like a swear word, short and full of hard consonants, but I don't want it to look too much like any English swear words. You can either come up with something entirely random, or base it off a swear word in another language. Leave a comment here with your name, email address, and your swear word, and whoever comes up with the most interesting swear word for my novel will get an in depth critique of the first five chapters of their manuscript. If you're not ready to let anyone look at your first five chapters yet, then I'll critique up to three short stories OR the first five chapters of a different manuscript.

Entries for the competition are due by 12:01 AM EST on the twentieth. That's a whole week. May the best swearer win!
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3 More Editing Links

March 12th 2010 12:46
Here are a couple more links I hope help you with your editing:

~Reworking Infodumps Workshop this is an article/exercise by Lazette Gifford talking about the perils of infodumping when introducing your novel's world and story. It also has an exercise designed to help you tackle infodumps and make them into readable prose.

~Junkfoodmonkey's Editing Recipe is one writer's process for editing. This article is on the Nanoedmo website.

~Good Parts and Other Parts is a great article talking about what you need to focus on when rewriting your novel-finding the good parts and the 'other parts' and making every part a good part.

I hope that you enjoy these links-and that we all have very productive weekends.
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Falling Behind

March 11th 2010 13:09
Unfortunately life has gotten in the way of my editing this month. I've begun the second draft of my novel, writing a new first chapter-but life has stalled me. Between a crippled grandmother, old friends coming back into the picture, and my general exhaustion, my started second draft is sitting on my USB key gathering dust.

Luckily, being a student in Toronto (I don't know about this in other places) I've got next week off of school, freeing up several hours of five days of my week. Some of this time will be devoted to catching up on school-my editing isn't the only thing I've fallen behind on-but I'm hoping to get most of my second draft done during this time period.

Hopefully you've come further with your work than I have; if not, don't give up hope. If you're participating in Nanoedmo, don't fret too much about your hours. Focus on how much of your manuscript you get rewritten. Don't think about how much time to do it; your goal is to finish a second draft of your novel, and even if it only takes you 40 hours, or you only make it most of the way to the end, it's still a huge accomplishment starting with a first draft and having a second draft in a month.

How are you coping with life and editing your novel?
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Instead of today's update, I've decided to write a book review of the book I finished last night, George R. R. Martin's a Game of Thrones.

The first thing I'll say about this book is that if you aren't prepared to commit yourself to a lot of reading, don't even start it. It's the first book in a series, and this book alone is eight hundred and seven pages


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Prompt One

March 9th 2010 12:20
Your goal for this month might be all about editing, but it's always good to keep the writing juices flowing. To help you keep writing, each week there will be a writing prompt. These are designed to be 500-1, 500 word writing exercises. They don't have to be full stories, as long as they sort of make sense.

This week, take a character from a different project than the one you're currently editing, someone who you are somewhat familiar with but who isn't quite a close friend yet. You will be writing from their point of view


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Week One Pep Talk&Short Exercise

March 8th 2010 12:21
The first few days of March have passed, and the first full week of March is about to begin. You may not be where you wanted to be, but remember that there's still most of a month left.

You might also be frustrated with the big picture problems of your first draft. If you find yourself dreading the words and dreading the work, while you look through the badly written parts that you've figured out, try to find things that you like. Great scenes, great description, real emotion, realistic characterization. Underline those parts or at least make a note of them. You'll find yourself liking your work more, and you'll find that rewriting what you don't like will come to you more easily


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Three Editing Links To Help Out

March 5th 2010 12:38
Every week for the rest of this month, I'm going to post either three or five links to good articles about editing fiction, in the hopes that you'll find the information useful or at least interesting. I still haven't made a final list of websites, so if you have a link you think should be listed in one of the posts this month, please send me an email at diannalgunn@gmail.com.

On to the links for this week


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Based on what you've read and worked on so far, make a list of five words you think you overuse. You'll probably-especially in a Nanovel-find an overuse of words like 'was', 'have', 'bloody' if you have a lot of gore, 'beautiful' if your character's exploring a new world. 'Moments' is a big one for me as I've struggled to find new ways of judging time for my world.

Beside each one, when you do your work for the day, do a tally of how many times that word has been used. After you've read your chapters for the day, find a thesaurus and look up similar words. List three similar words that you are comfortable using beside each word that you overuse, and then replace each word you overuse at least once in your chapters for the day. Keep this list close to you when you're editing the rest of your novel


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A Prompt To Distract Yourself

March 2nd 2010 12:39
Your goal for this month might be all about editing, but it's always good to keep the writing juices flowing. To help you keep writing, each week there will be a writing prompt. These are designed to be 500-1, 500 word writing exercises. They don't have to be full stories, as long as they sort of make sense.

This week, take a character from a different project than the one you're currently editing, someone who you are somewhat familiar with but who isn't quite a close friend yet. You will be writing from their point of view


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Today is the first day of March. It is also the first day of Nanoedmo, a month during which many writers work on editing and some reach for the goal of 50 hours of editing. In honour of these events, and considering the fact that I am also editing my novel this month, I decided at the beginning of this year that I would be doing an editing workshop in March.

Most writers experience some difficulties while writing their books, but for most of us, when we get past that point, we discover that writing is the easy part: rewriting is the hard part


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